My travel partner
I like to travel very much, especially to visit nature by car. For this reason, I decided to buy a car last month. However, there were some issues I needed to think for a new car. First issue is an economic consideration because I do not have enough budgets to buy a perfect car. Moreover, the price of oil gets more and more expensive, so that I have to choose a small car that consumes less oil than the common cars. Second issue is maintained consideration. I need a car that should be reliable, and it would not cost lots of money for maintaining or repairing. The final concern is the appearance. My ideal car must look good. After some serious thinking, I decided to buy Nissan March as my travel partner.
There are several reasons why I choose to buy March. First, March is a 1,300 c.c. small car that owns beautiful price, cheap tax, and low oil using features. When I go for traveling, I usually just go with my girl friend. So I do not need a big car but a suitable one. Owing to the fact that is a small car; I would not pay expensive tax every year. Besides, when the car that is drove by two persons, it is lower oil costing than other big cars. So, my car is an economic car that can help me to reduce some costs, and I can use the save money for other uses.
Furthermore, it is a popular car, so the regular maintaining and repairing charge is cheaper than other cars, especially imported ones are at the same level as my car. It is because March is made in Taiwan, and the assembly for the car is inexpensive. It is important for me because I have no idea about the mechanism of cars. If my car breaks down, it is easy and cheap to have it repaired in the garage. Moreover, March is a reliable car and it is easy to take care of it. Now I can travel frequently by my new vehicle and enrich my leisure life. For this reason, it is very appropriate for me.
Finally, March is a beautiful car with nice appearance and sharp. March comes in two types: that are four-door and five-door. My car is five-door that does not have a glove compartment, and it is cuter than the four-door ones. My car has a pretty red color and comfortable leather chairs that my girlfriend likes very much.
My car, red bean, is my good travel partner that contains a lot of features that I like and need. Although is it not an excellent one for traveling, I believe it is enough for me. Recently, I start to plan a three-day tour for east coast. I believe red bean will be a helpful partner in this trip.
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Moreover, the price of oil gets more and more expensive that I have to choice a small car that consumes less oil than general.
-->so that I have to choose...than the common (average) cars
and it would not spend lots of money for maintaining or repairing.
-->costs lots of money...
Or
--> I would not need to spend ...
人+ spend
物+ cost
Final concern is the appearance must be good look.
-->The final concern is... My ideal car must look good.
After deep though,
-->After some serious thinking
First, March is a 1,300 c.c. small car that owns beautiful price, cheap tax, and low oil using features.
-->There are several reasons why I choose to buy March. First...
Owing to it is a small car; I would not pay expensive tax every year.
-->Owing to the fact that is a...
-->Owing to +名詞 (動名詞)
Besides, when the car that is drove by two persons, it is lower oil costing than other big cars.
-->I don't understand this sentence. Do you want to say: 'a car used by two persons uses less oil than a bigger car that takes four people'?
So, my car is an economic car that can help me to reduce some costs, and I can use the save money for other uses.
-->good!
Furthermore, it is a popular car, so the regular maintaining and repairing charge is cheaper than other cars, especially, imported ones that are familiar level with it.
-->especially imported ones are at the same level as my car.
It is because March is made in Taiwan, and the assembly for the car is inexpensive. It is important for me because I have no idea about machine of cars.
-->the mechanism of cars
If my car broke down, it is easy and low-priced to repair.
-->breaks down, it is easy and cheap to have it repaired in the garage.
-->have something repaired 請人修
-->have it cut 請人剪
-->have it cleaned 請人清理
have something +PP 有請別人做之意
Moreover, March is a reliable car and it is easy to take care of it. Now I can travel frequently by my new vehicle and enrich my leisure life. For this reason, it is very appropriate for me.
-->good!
Finally, March is a beautiful car with nice appearance and sharp.
-->nice appearance (名詞) + sharp (形容詞) 不是很coherent 不登對
可以and 前後兩的字都換成名詞或形容詞
March has two kinds that are four-door and five-door.
March comes in two types：...
My car is five-door that does not have a glove compartment but cute than four-door ones.
-->it is cuter than the...
My car has pretty red color and comfortable leather chairs that my girlfriend likes very much.
-->My car has a...
My car, red bean, is my good travel partner that contains a lot of features that I like and need. Although, it is not an excellent one for traveling, I believe it is enough for me.
-->Although is it no...
Recently, I start to plan a three-day tour for east coast. I believe red bean will be a helpful partner in this trip.
-->lucky you! You have got a girl friend and a new car!! I am so jealous.
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